Purpose: To describe an interesting character so we can tell a story about them at the Marae stay.
WALT: Entertain (character description)
Think of a character you could write about.
Draw them. +
Introduce your character in an entertaining way.+
Describe their looks.x
Describe their personality.-
I think/feel statement (Conclusion / Summary)x
Criteria: I can
Descriptive vocabulary (words that help to SHOW the reader)
use a range of verbs
Language features (phrases that help paint a picture)
select one or two similes
use onomatopoeia to show sounds
select words that start with the same sound (alliteration)
My writing is 2-3 paragraphs (100 - 200 words)
Learning Partner Comment
Feedback: I like the way you explaind every main thing about her.
Feedforward: Next time you could tell the fellings more specifically
Overall, how well do you think your learning partner has done?
The Butterfly Girl
The butterfly girl is nice
She helps everyone.
Butterfly girls wings glitter in the sunshine
She shots though the sky like a shooting star.
Her Antennas are magical. Thay sparkle in the moon light.
Her wings flutter when she is happy.
Even though she is a kind butterfly she has a brave side too.
You don't want her to get angry.
If you Get her angry RUN FOR YOUR LIFE. Other wise she will put you in a cage and won't let you
out intill you be nice. Is you be nice. She will give you a reward. that reward is magic glitter. She said
" if you sprinkle it on yourself then you will have wings."