Wednesday, 16 November 2016

How to make Russian fudge!

W.A.L.T:Procedural writing.

Evaluation: I think I did great.

Description: We had a market day the other day and we had to do procedural writing about how to make your product and my product is Russian fudge. So I had to do a poster about how to make it if anyone else wants to make it.

Feedback:This looks great sam I like it a lot because it is lade out nice and it is nice and easy to  see.
Feedforward: Well you could add some photos to go with the ingredients.


Tuesday, 8 November 2016

prep\ market day!

W.A.L.T: market day

Evaluation:I think I did great.

Description: we have market day this week and we have to get ready so this is my slide for market day hope you enjoy.

feedback: I think you did well because you planned it well with your team mates.
feedforward: Everything is great.

Te Reo.

W.A.L.T: Do maori words on market day.

Evaluation: I think that I did a good job.

Description:You get told to make a maori poster for market day this week.

Feedback: I like how you have the costing and the maori words/sentences on the poster.
feedforward: you could have written a little more description and be more persuasive.
By: Arisha.



Monday, 7 November 2016

Buddy novel study

W.A.L.T:Novel reading

Evaluation:I think I did good

Description:this is my buddy novel study we got put in pairs and we had to chose a book to read I picked Troublesome Jones! we have 5 task's to do for every single chapter.

Feedback:your've done a lot on your slide its great.
Feedforward:Even though I know the task the people looking at your work won't know them.

Sunday, 6 November 2016


W.A.L.T Maths

Evaluation I think I did great 

Description we have this maths question: I have 6 blue and 6 orange jelly beans what are the chances of getting a blue? And the other one is I have 6 blue and 7 orange what are the chances of getting a orange? here are the photos below.

Feedback you did good at the photos 
Feedforward you could of done a better description.
by poppy