Wednesday, 23 March 2016

El Rancho camp writing\persuasive writing.

W.A.L.T: write a persuasive argument

El Rancho, You think that it's a dangerous place because guns and bow 'n arrows your wrong and I'm here to tell you why. There are instructor there adults people are there to make sure you feel safe. It has amazing water slides and pools there is even a little pool that is warm and you can relax in if you feel cold. I agree that El Rancho is a safe place and to prove it I'm here to tell you read on.

Firstly there are instructors to make sure you feel safe and comfortable were you are staying. They even ask you if you are allergic to anything, if you are you will get asked by the kitchen lady's what are you allergic to. You will also be allowed to go eat first.

Secondly you have a lot of activities to do, like on rifles theres a safety  line and the arrows are fake so you don't get hurt. Even though they are fake they still can hit the target and stay there. when you finished you have to wait till the two other people finish when they have finished then you go out to go get your target. When its a hot day you might get lucky and be able to go to the pool or if its a cold day you might get lucky and have free time and stay in-side and play board games or play cards.

Thirdly you have amazing cabins that are very comfortable to sleep in. You can also bring your own soft toys if you want. When you wake up you have to chose to have a shower in the morning or at night. You can also bring a light / torch to play spot light out and red light green light on the field. My school looked at the stars and spotted a planet, I thought that it was mars because it was red.

Finally I believe that I have proven that El Rancho is a nice, safe, friendly place. I'm going to ask my mum if we can go to El Rancho cause it was so much fun. Also I had a lot of first times there like kayaking, horse riding, rifles, archery, mini golf so you get what I mean so I  hope you agree because after this I would agree.

Evaluation: I think I did great at making this master piece of writing  and it was a long time to complete this.

Description: This master piece of writing is an argument of who thinks El Rancho is a safe place or a dangerous place. I wrote to persuade others that I highly agree because you can't possibly get hurt.

feedback: You did great! You deserves a green target.
feedforward: You did amazing.
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Thursday, 17 March 2016

El Rancho camp

W.A.L.T: Build positive relationships.

Description: this is my camp photos that I done over when I was on camp.I worked hard to make my goals and try to make it happen. When I finished filling in the day one,two,three,four I drew pictures I didn't have time to draw on every single one.

I think I did a great job!
Feedforward: good job Samanatha you have clear photos and I love your description
Feedback: none

  







Thursday, 3 March 2016

Geometry passport

W.A.L.T: Position and Orientation



           

This is my geometry passport for maths.

I think I did good at maths.
Feedback: it is great. Poppy
feedforward: nothing it is good




this map is made from the story Hansel and Gretel.

Description: We had to use a compass to work out this map because we had to write directions as well. Our student teacher Madison didn't want my maths group to just say go right or left she wanted us to use the compass way so you would want t read it. This is my maps that my maths group had to make. This first one is inspired from the Hansel and Gretel story like it tells you. The first one is the one that I made up my self.

I think did great at my maps

Feedback: I think that this is good
Feedforward: none you did a grate job green target





Description: this is my maps that my maths group had to make. This second one is inspired from the Hansel and Gretel story like it tells you. The second one is the one that I made up my self.

I think  did great at my maps
Feedback: I think that this is good
Feedforward: none you did a grate job green target




Okatia Writing


W.A.L.T: Writing


There’s something much bigger than me. Throbbing in his veins his heart started to dance, it started to hurt him like he was in a volcano. Dancing through the forest he was filled with anger, he felt enraged. While he danced he started to feel a bit weird. His branches were falling off like a bunch of bouncing balls. He arrived at the ranges with a big crash.

Description: I am doing writing about Okatia. I didn't have any help from my group so I don't have a real story sorry.

I think I did well I could of done better though.


Feedback: you done great in using descriptive writing.
Feedforward: you did great, you could also put the whole story on not just your plan.
orange target